|
Ehm
Aug 14, 2008 1:47:03 GMT -8
Post by Xinnai on Aug 14, 2008 1:47:03 GMT -8
A story I dug up that I wrote a few years ago. The beginning isn't there, unfortunately, but I'll find it. There's also a lot more to it. I just have to find the notebook I wrote it down in. x.x This is my "pen name", by the way. www.fictionpress.com/~ashleighrhughes
|
|
|
Ehm
Aug 17, 2008 9:56:17 GMT -8
Post by neopanther on Aug 17, 2008 9:56:17 GMT -8
Hmmm Xin xin xin. I get an odd feeling gfrom tmhis story, you're writing is damn good! Though the story reminds me of an odd arrangement crossover between Twilight, Maximum Ride, and Underworld (the film lol) So far I've really enjoyed it. I'd love to get some more. Though. I think there needs to be a little more reading done of it by you, theres a few parts that, perhaps, don't make a huge amount of sense. I know what that's like as you know I'm a writer too, but in a different way. Eh. It's just one of those things, some one else reading it, beta'ing it, just irons out anything that is unclear, or helps you expand upon a topic that perhaps needs it. So far? My bet is that Russel's not the G'Host, that Patrick is, that she only wants patrick because he's a G'Host and thats what they do, and she's meant to be with James. Russel? He's probably a werewolf or something, or he is the G'Host and Pat's a wolf. Feels logical. anyway - i enjoyed that!! I think i ignored dragon a little because of it LOL
|
|
|
Ehm
Aug 17, 2008 14:12:33 GMT -8
Post by Xinnai on Aug 17, 2008 14:12:33 GMT -8
Aww. Thanks so much, Pan. xD I like it. I'm missing some pieces though. I lent the story to my friend and he didn't give it back. Much sadness, because I don't remember all of it and it's about only halfway typed up. I like your theories though.
|
|